WheresFredTaylor wrote:Is the tense not wrong as well?
I recall it was drummed into me not to date (see: no split infinitive) copy as far as the 'update/happening detail' would have been concerned. If it reflected on necessary background info, fine, but even then, avoid... radio is now/present.
IIRC, Broadcast News locally in Vancouver was great in this regard, and in a small operation, that meant rip-and-read when in a hurry was safe.